Candida Meyrick's latest attempt at avian self-help, "Be More Bird," falls flat due to its reliance on tired cliches and anthropomorphizing. The book is built around 20 brief "life lessons" inspired by the author's Harris hawk, Sophia Houdini White Wing, with each lesson serving as a watered-down version of Meyrick's own musings.
The central theme of the book – embracing one's true nature and staying grounded – is admirable, but it's executed in a way that feels shallow and contrived. The "life lessons" offered by Bird range from simplistic advice like "stay true to yourself" to more obtuse statements like "memory is celestial, airborne." These messages feel more like platitudes than genuinely insightful guidance, and they often come across as Meyrick attempting to pass off her own pretentiousness as profound wisdom.
One of the biggest problems with "Be More Bird" is its neglect of the hawk's physical life. Instead of delving into the intricacies of Bird's bodily existence – her ideal hunting weight, her moult cycle, and her relationships with her human caregivers – Meyrick focuses on the more esoteric aspects of her avian consciousness.
When Meyrick does attempt to be more nuanced, she often ends up sounding self-critical and uncertain. She acknowledges that some of her ideas are "pretentious" and "unwieldy," but instead of cutting back or refining her message, she piles on even more cliched language, creating a sense of hyperbole that feels more like an attempt to impress than genuine introspection.
Ultimately, "Be More Bird" feels like a response to the success of Helen Macdonald's "H Is for Hawk," which explored similar themes in a more thoughtful and insightful way. Meyrick's book, on the other hand, seems to be trying to cash in on the popularity of nature writing by regurgitating familiar tropes rather than offering anything new or compelling.
The result is a book that feels ploddingly earthbound, lacking in depth and nuance. Even Sophia Houdini White Wing, the hawk at the center of it all, might have something stern but uplifting to say about this meandering self-help effort.
The central theme of the book – embracing one's true nature and staying grounded – is admirable, but it's executed in a way that feels shallow and contrived. The "life lessons" offered by Bird range from simplistic advice like "stay true to yourself" to more obtuse statements like "memory is celestial, airborne." These messages feel more like platitudes than genuinely insightful guidance, and they often come across as Meyrick attempting to pass off her own pretentiousness as profound wisdom.
One of the biggest problems with "Be More Bird" is its neglect of the hawk's physical life. Instead of delving into the intricacies of Bird's bodily existence – her ideal hunting weight, her moult cycle, and her relationships with her human caregivers – Meyrick focuses on the more esoteric aspects of her avian consciousness.
When Meyrick does attempt to be more nuanced, she often ends up sounding self-critical and uncertain. She acknowledges that some of her ideas are "pretentious" and "unwieldy," but instead of cutting back or refining her message, she piles on even more cliched language, creating a sense of hyperbole that feels more like an attempt to impress than genuine introspection.
Ultimately, "Be More Bird" feels like a response to the success of Helen Macdonald's "H Is for Hawk," which explored similar themes in a more thoughtful and insightful way. Meyrick's book, on the other hand, seems to be trying to cash in on the popularity of nature writing by regurgitating familiar tropes rather than offering anything new or compelling.
The result is a book that feels ploddingly earthbound, lacking in depth and nuance. Even Sophia Houdini White Wing, the hawk at the center of it all, might have something stern but uplifting to say about this meandering self-help effort.